Mes mains

d'un geste
ample 
et précis

mes mains
dessinent
tes contours


que rien

pour
là 
ou tout
recommence

Comments

[andrée]

Tes mains tracenttes mots coulentcontinue !

[Mélisande]

Toujours aussi beau...

[surfingmoune]

Ton joli texte me fait penser à la chanson
"Mes mains dessinent dans le noir
La forme d'un espoir
Qui ressemble à ton corps..."
Très bonne soirée
A bientôt

[nadia-vraie]

Très beau tilk.Bonne soirée et A+Ben... Tu savais que c'était la guerre des bisous ?Voilà... tu le sais !____♥_♥_____♥_♥________♥___♥___♥___♥______♥_____♥_♥_____♥_____♥______♥______♥______♥___BISOUS__♥_________♥_______♥_____________♥___♥_________________♥__________A RENVOYER A TES AMIS.::♥::..::♥::..::♥:: ..::♥::.___ET A MOI AUSSI____.::♥::..::♥::..::♥:: ..::♥::.__SI J'EN FAIS PARTIE__.::♥::..::♥::..::♥:: ..::♥:____________________ ____$$$$$$$$$$_______$$$$___$$$$__ ____$$$$$$$$$$$______$$$$$$_$$$$$$_ ____$$$_____$$$______$$$$$$$$$$$$$_ ____$$$_____$$$_______$$$$$$$$$$$__ ____$$$$$$$$$$________$$$$$$$$$___ ____$$$$$$$$$$_________$$$$$$$____ ____$$$_____$$$__________$$$$$_____ ____$$$_____$$$___________$$$______ ____$$$$$$$$$$$____________$_______ ____$$$$$$$$$$____________________ ______________________$$$$___$$$$__ _____________________$$$$$$_$$$$$$_ ____$$$$$$$$$$$______$$$$$$$$$$$$$_ ____$$$$$$$$$$$_______$$$$$$$$$$$__ ________$$$____________$$$$$$$$$___ ________$$$_____________$$$$$$$____ ____$$$$$$$$$$$__________$$$$$_____ ____$$$$$$$$$$$___________$$$______ ___________________________$_______ ___________________________________ ____$$$$$$$$$$$_______$$$$___$$$$__ ____$$$$$$$$$$$______$$$$$$_$$$$$$_ ____$$$______________$$$$$$$$$$$$$_ ____$$$$$$$$$$$_______$$$$$$$$$$$__ ____$$$$$$$$$$$________$$$$$$$$$___ ____________$$$_________$$$$$$$____ ____$$$$$$$$$$$__________$$$$$_____ ____$$$$$$$$$$$___________$$$______ ___________________________$_______ ___________________________________ ____$$$$$$$$$$$_______$$$$___$$$$__ ____$$$$$$$$$$$______$$$$$$_$$$$$$_ ____$$$_____$$$______$$$$$$$$$$$$$_ ____$$$_____$$$_______$$$$$$$$$$$__ ____$$$$$$$$$$$________$$$$$$$$$___ ____$$$$$$$$$$$_________$$$$$$$____ _________________________$$$$$_____ __________________________$$$______ ____$$$_____$$$____________$_______ ____$$$_____$$$____________________ ____$$$_____$$$_______$$$$___$$$$__ ____$$$$$$$$$$$______$$$$$$_$$$$$$_ ____$$$$$$$$$$$______$$$$$$$$$$$$$_ ______________________$$$$$$$$$$$__ _______________________$$$$$$$$$___ ________________________$$$$$$$____ _________________________$$$$$_____ __________________________$$$______ ___________________________$_______ _______________Auteur de la réponse :

[Hephaestion]

Beau talent que le tien !Amitiés !

[Roby]

très joli texte. Merci.Bonne soirée A+Amicalement.Roby.

[marlene]

Cette litanie qui avance lentement est très émouvante

[Chana]

Bravo Tilk. Je deviens gâteuse à me répéter mais j'aime vraiment beaucoup ce que tu écris.Bonne fin de journée

[miriel :0091:]

___♥___♥___♥___♥______♥_____♥_♥_____♥_____♥______♥______♥______♥___BISOUS__♥_________♥_______♥_____________♥___♥_________________♥__________A RENVOYER A TES AMIS.::♥::..::♥::..::♥:: ..::♥::.___ET A MOI AUSSI____.::♥::..::♥::..::♥:: ..::♥::.__SI J'EN FAIS PARTIE__.::♥::..::♥::..::♥:: ..::♥:____________________ ____$$$$$$$$$$_______$$$$___$$$$__ ____$$$$$$$$$$$______$$$$$$_$$$$$$_ ____$$$_____$$$______$$$$$$$$$$$$$_ ____$$$_____$$$_______$$$$$$$$$$$__ ____$$$$$$$$$$________$$$$$$$$$___ ____$$$$$$$$$$_________$$$$$$$____ ____$$$_____$$$__________$$$$$_____ ____$$$_____$$$___________$$$______ ____$$$$$$$$$$$____________$_______ ____$$$$$$$$$$____________________ ______________________$$$$___$$$$__ _____________________$$$$$$_$$$$$$_ ____$$$$$$$$$$$______$$$$$$$$$$$$$_ ____$$$$$$$$$$$_______$$$$$$$$$$$__ ________$$$____________$$$$$$$$$___ ________$$$_____________$$$$$$$____ ____$$$$$$$$$$$__________$$$$$_____ ____$$$$$$$$$$$___________$$$______ ___________________________$_______ ___________________________________ ____$$$$$$$$$$$_______$$$$___$$$$__ ____$$$$$$$$$$$______$$$$$$_$$$$$$_ ____$$$______________$$$$$$$$$$$$$_ ____$$$$$$$$$$$_______$$$$$$$$$$$__ ____$$$$$$$$$$$________$$$$$$$$$___ ____________$$$_________$$$$$$$____ ____$$$$$$$$$$$__________$$$$$_____ ____$$$$$$$$$$$___________$$$______ ___________________________$_______ ___________________________________ ____$$$$$$$$$$$_______$$$$___$$$$__ ____$$$$$$$$$$$______$$$$$$_$$$$$$_ ____$$$_____$$$______$$$$$$$$$$$$$_ ____$$$_____$$$_______$$$$$$$$$$$__ ____$$$$$$$$$$$________$$$$$$$$$___ ____$$$$$$$$$$$_________$$$$$$$____ _________________________$$$$$_____ __________________________$$$______ ____$$$_____$$$____________$_______ ____$$$_____$$$____________________ ____$$$_____$$$_______$$$$___$$$$__ ____$$$$$$$$$$$______$$$$$$_$$$$$$_ ____$$$$$$$$$$$______$$$$$$$$$$$$$_ ______________________$$$$$$$$$$$__ _______________________$$$$$$$$$___ ________________________$$$$$$$____ _________________________$$$$$_____ __________________________$$$______ ___________________________$_______ _______________

[fatalisme]

ne tremble pas dessine là encore et encore l'amour a une force incroyable et de plus il te rend talentueux..bien a toi

[le baladin]

et une plume à trouvée tes mains pour nous écrire ce poème ou se mélange le début et la fin dans l'éternel recomencement  au travers tes mains se transcrivent les mots de ton âme amtiés phil

[corinne]

Encore très beauBisous

[gazou]

"rien ne s'achève...là où tout recommence" je le crois, je le vis...Hier,quand j'ai choisi le poëme de Andrée Chédid,l'idée m'est venue qu'il te plairait,je ne me suis pas trompée,merci de me l'avoir confirmé.

[:0019: Bruno]

Un bien joli texte...

[mrcafe]

un bien joli texte ,je te souhaite une bonne journée..

[Petit Ange]

Coucouje viens te faire le bisou et te souhaiter de passer une douce journée...Petit Ange...

[Quichottine :0010:]

C'est magnifique !